Song about kissin' a lady between her legs

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  1. BassDude

    BassDude New Member

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    Hey folks:

    I was so inspired by the "How to eat pussy" thread, I decided to write a song about the topic. :brow The song will have a slow but heavy (hopefully, quite sexy) groove, and I plan to base the music around the Arabic scale (which is a bit sexy in it's own right).

    I've got a first draft of lyrics, pasted below. Let me know what you think. I want to create a song that is raw, sexy, lustful, and erotic. I DON'T want it to come across as crude, vulgar, offensive, or just plain nasty. So, help me weed out the nasty parts and tell me which parts are good imagery along the sexy and erotic lines. I may have an audio rough draft in a couple weeks...I'll paste a link to that here as well for feedback. Here are the lyrics so far:

    Verse A (sung):
    Mind and body entrench to quench your passion.
    Heart felt words and a little touch just for anticipation.

    [Break - breathing]

    Verse B (rapped):
    I sense your trust and oh your sexiness.
    Demonstrate my lust 'til you almost combust.

    Feel the peppermint sting, to me you cling.
    Twistin' your hips while I taste you, sweet thing.

    Your mind I'll engage and your heart I'll enlist.
    Until I find your place I'll gently persist.

    Smell the pleasure kissin' petals on the rose.
    A few words compose, then oh-oh-oh's.

    Chorus (sung 1st line, then rest rapped):
    Kiss the groove, I'm so into you.
    How I yearn, but you'll quickly learn
    Need nothing in return to make you burn.

    [Break - female moan]

    Verse A:
    I embrace your body, and I kiss your mind.
    Heart to heart, skin to skin, legs and arms entwine.

    [Break - breathing]

    Verse B:
    Pressure on my face as I so gently taste
    Tracing words of love in this offset embrace.

    Write an "I love you" on vertical lips.
    Clean you like a cat, self-control eclipse.

    Wave after wave of involuntary motion.
    Oh how I feel your slippery emotion.

    Now slow it all down, don't you agree?
    Hum and strum again until you come with me.

    Chorus:
    Kiss the groove, I'm so into you.
    How I yearn, but you'll quickly learn
    Need nothing in return to make you burn.

    [Break - female moan]


    From here, probably a guitar solo over the main groove, then repeat the chorus to the end.

    Lemme know what ya think!

    BassDude
     
  2. LaVitaDolce

    LaVitaDolce New Member

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    That's really cool. :)
     
  3. LA_20

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    lol i like it
     
  4. prish

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    lol...the lyric great. What about the song? Remember to upload here when it done. I would sing this whenever i want to lick my girl's. Haha
     
  5. Bluesy

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    *tosses my panties on stage while cheering enthusiastically* :D
     
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    Hey folks:

    OK, I've gone through a few revisions (and gotten some feedback from lady friends of mine...man, women are awesome :ladiesman ) I think I've mostly "de-nastified" this, but perhaps a bit more to go. I've changed the title from "Kiss the Groove" to "N2U". Although the play on words may have been perhaps cute or clever, it just didn't feel like it was working. So, here's the latest lyrics (copyright 2007, Sisk Music).

    Title: N2U

    Verse A (sung):
    Soft-spoken words, gentle touch, anticipation.
    Touching you fills my soul with elation.

    [Break - breathing]

    Verse B (rapped):
    I sense your trust and oh your sexiness.
    I'll demonstrate my lust 'til you almost combust.

    Feel the peppermint sting, to me you cling.
    Spiral kisses 'til I taste all of you, sweet thing.

    Your mind I'll engage and your heart I'll enlist.
    Until I find your special place I'll gently persist.

    Smell the pleasure kissin' petals on the rose.
    Love words compose, then the oh-oh-oh's.

    Chorus (last line rapped):
    Beloved anew, I'm so into you.
    With me your heart you do entrust
    With a passionate love, plus a taste of lust.
    This love renewed, I'm so into you.
    How I yearn, but you'll quickly learn
    Need nothing in return to make you burn.

    [Break - female moan]

    Verse A:
    I'll kiss your mind, show that love is kind.
    Heart to heart, skin to skin, legs and arms entwine.

    [Break - breathing]

    Verse B:
    Put your lips to my face as I so tenderly taste
    Tracing words of love in this offset embrace.

    Overpowering passion, self-control eclipse.
    Write a message of love on slippery lips.

    Wave after wave of involuntary motion.
    Oh how I feel your culminating emotion.

    In the darkness of the night the light you'll see.
    Turnin' words into passion 'til again you come with me.

    Chorus:
    Beloved anew, I'm so into you.
    With me your heart you do entrust.
    With a passionate love, plus a taste of lust.
    This love renewed, I'm so into you.
    How I yearn, but you'll quickly learn
    Need nothing in return to make you burn.

    [Break - female moan]
     
  8. Avanti

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    cool. lol
     
  9. BassDude

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    Progress! I've got a rough demo recorded of this song (or at least the first two verses and choruses). Still working out instruments and the vocal melody, etc., (like I said, it's a rough demo...;)) but if anyone wants to take a listen, PM me and I'll shoot you a URL to an MP3 file. (I don't want to post the link here, as it has my true identity embedded in the URL :brow ).

    Cheers,
    BassDude
     
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    I'm changing a couple lyrics to make them easier to sing/flow better/etc. But there's one special case...this lyric in the first rapped verse...

    Your mind I'll engage and your heart I'll enlist.

    ...will change to...

    Your mind I'll lubricate and your heart I'll enlist.

    ...in honor of Bluesy's insightful quote (which I just love): "Lubricate your mind first".

    BassDude
     
  11. Bluesy

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    Sexcellent! :D :brow I can't wait to hear the finished version!