Some of my poems I wrote

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  1. GentleManSteve

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    Do you care I never want to say bye
    Do you care loosing you will make me cry
    Do you care I want to be always there
    Do you care
    Do you care
    Do you care
    Do you care I love to so
    Do you care I never want to let you go
    Do you care loosing you I could not bare
    Do you care
    Do you care
    Do you care
    Do you care I want to love you with all my might
    Do you care I want to hold you all night
    Do you care I would rather love you than to be a multiMillionaire
    Do you care
    Do you care
    Do you care
    Do you care I want to get on one knee
    Do you care I want to say will you marry me Aimee
    Do you care I want to have an Affair
    Do you care
    Do you care
    Do you care
    Do you care I want to be the one you adores
    Do you care I want to be all yours
    Do you care that me and you would make the perfect pair
    Do you care
    Do you care
    Do you care

    Roses are red and violets are blue
    I can not express in words the feeling I have for you
    But if I had to try
    It would be as deep as the ocean and higher than the sky
    But it is more by far
    It is higher than the highest star
    My love is high
    loosing you would make me cry
    To write my love with water would drain the oceans dry
    and reach from sky to sky
    and take my whole life to the day I die

    I am in love with a girl For goodness sake
    I love her so much and loosing her would make my heart break
    I love her so much she is always on my mind
    I love her so much and it is putting my heart in a bind
    I long after her sweet embrace
    and I wonder if I will ever see her sweet smiling face
    I do not believe she knows how much I love her
    The truth is I love her and never want to see her with another
    I love her and that is plain to see
    What really hurts is she doesn't feel the same way about me
    She doesn't feel the same way I do
    I just hope she knows that my love is very very true
    I plan on never ever hurting her again
    I wish she knew that I really want to be more than a friend
    I want to grab her up and hold her tight all night in each others arms
    I really believe our love can withstand the stormiest of all storms
    I believe our love could be stronger than all the powers of the universe
    I know she doesn't love me though but I thought she did at first
    I do not know if she knows what to believe
    I just hope she knows that living without her love is making my heart grieve
    I hope she knows she knows I can love her till I have nothing left
    I just wish she will love me before I do something stupid and kill myself
    I just wish I do not have to wait too much longer
    I just wish she knows our love could be no wronger
    I know she probably believes I write these poems to be romantic
    But the truth is, just to be with her I would swim across the Atlantic
    I know I wouldn't make it without drowning
    But she would at least know I really loved her and I wasn't just clowning
    I wish she knows I will love her until I take my last breath
    But my love for her will even go beyond death
    I will still love her even when I am in the grave
    I hope she knows my love will never give in and cave
    I will keep after her till the end of time
    I won't even quit then I won't quit till she is mine
    I hope she knows my love is here to stay
    I do not care what she has to say
    I am going to love her any god damn way
    I am going to do whatever it takes
    because I know our love is not a bunch of mistakes

    I love you more than words can express
    I love you more and more not less and less
    I hurt so much to know I made you cry
    I love you and never want to say bye
    I love you babie
    forever and ever even to eternity
    Please for me babie
    I get donwn on bended knees
    And I say forgive me babie forgive me please.
    You are the reason I love you so
    I never ever want to let you go
    I want to hold you tight
    and for you to tell me everything will be all right
    I never ever want to make you cry
    I never ever want to say bye
    I want to love you to the end of eternity
    I want you to say you love me
    I want to look deep into you big round eyes
    I want to wipe the tears away and say I want to be here more than ever and I never want to say my good byes
    I loved you more than life itself
    I will love you till I have nothing left
    I can not explain my love
    but I can say it is purer than a dove
    I have cried so much here lately even enough for years
    I have soaked my pillar with my tears
    I thought I was going to cry my eyes out
    Babie I love you and that is no doubt
    I love your personality
    and I will love it for eternity
    My heart is so broken
    I have cried so much my pillar is soaken
    I will never ever ever cheat
    I will do anything to please you even kiss your feet
    I want to hold you, squeeze you and please you
    the whole night through
    I want to hold you till the skies turn from black to blue
    I want to be there at sun rise and look into your big round eyes
    and say I love you and never ever want to say my good byes
    I want you to look back at mine
    and say I will be here till the end of time
    I want to look deep into your soul
    and say I love you so and never ever want to let you go
    I want you to be here for me my whole life
    I would love to have you as my wife
    It is time for this poem to end
    I just hope you at least want to be my friend.
    I know I could go on forever telling you how I am feeling
    But I have to stop and hope you will forgive me because I come kneeling
    I just hope you forgive me so my heart can get to healing.
    When I hurt you I cried so much my eyes was blurry
    So Please forgive me in a hurry

    I know a girl That Loves me so much
    She hasn't said it but she really want to feel my touch
    I know she does I can see it in her eyes
    she wants me down between her thighs
    But enough with this thing
    let me tell you how I make women sing
    First I kiss and suck on her lips
    while running my hands up and down her sides with my finger tips
    I then kiss and suck on her neck a while
    I know she likes this because she gives me a smile
    I then move to her tit
    and kiss, lick, and suck on them a little bit
    She is liking this I know because she is having a fit
    I can really tell she is loving it
    because I got my fingers on her clit rubbing it
    She opens her eyes open wide
    and says I want you deep inside
    I said in due time
    because I want to make you chime
    I move down to her belly button and flick my tongue in and out
    she is loving this there is not doubt.
    She grabs my head and gives it a guide
    and says I want your tongue deep inside
    I stick my tongue in just a little bit
    she said come on baby stick it all the way in my slit
    I start tongue fucking her pussy hard and fast
    I even tongue fucked her ass.
    She gave my head a little guide
    and says come on baby I want you back inside
    I start tongue fucking her pussy fast and hard
    she goes limp and drops her guard
    I know she is loving it now
    because I can here her moaning and saying wow
    She says oh baby that feels so good
    I say I know baby I eat pussy like I know I should
    she grabs my head and screams don't stop
    I am almost at the top
    I was ramming my tongue all the way in
    I was ramming it all the way to my chin
    She starts gasping for air
    and says don't stop baby I am almost there
    She starts humping at a fast pace
    then she cums all over my face
    She says god damn that was so good
    I said I know baby, I do it like I know I should.
    She says don't tease
    give me your dick please
    I say in good time
    then I will make you chime
    I move to her clit
    and lick and suck on it a little bit
    She says oh god that feels like nothing I have ever felt
    I know she is liking this because she is starting to melt
    She starts screaming something fearous
    she was screaming so loud I thought her mother was going to hear us
    yea she was screaming real real loud
    I thought the the planes was going to hear us in the cloud
    She start bucking her pussy on my face
    at a fast pace
    she orgasms
    and goes into spasms
    I run my fingers in her pussy and on her clit
    and sucked her cum off my fingers a little bit
    She says oh my god that was hot
    now give me what you got
    I say not yet I want to massage your G-Spot
    I stick my fingers inside
    I seen her eyes open wide
    I say hey baby is that it
    she says and play with my clit
    I am massaging her G-Spot and clit
    She start bucking like a wild horse
    she is bucking back with all her force
    She is loving this I really can tell
    She says you do this very well
    I say tell me something I do not know
    I know how to satisfy a pussy hole
    She says don't stop I am almost at the summit
    I said baby I am going to make you bust out like a commit
    She says oh no I have to pee
    I say it ain't pee let it go all over me
    I said it is pussy juice
    so let it bust loose
    She starts cumming like Niagara Falls
    she squirts all over the bed and all over the walls
    she drenched me from my head to me feet
    She says oh god baby I think I am in heat
    please baby please baby give me your meat
    I said yea that was just icing on the cake
    Now it is time to give you my tube steak
    I stick my dick inside
    and open her pussy up wide
    she says give it to me all the way to your balls
    I don't want a little bit I want it all
    I shoved it all the way in where my belly was slamming against her clit
    I know she is liking it because her pussy is starting to spit
    She is bucking back like a wild bull
    I look in her eyes and say I am about to take you to school
    I looked in her eyes
    and I seen surprise
    She was amazed at what I was doing
    I was giving her a damn good screwing
    She grabs my arm
    and says you are fucking me like a thunder storm
    She says fuck me as fast as you can
    I want to snap back like the rubber band man
    I say here I go
    I am going to try to demolish that pussy hoe
    I start fucking her pussy fast and hard
    I fucked it so hard I thought it was going to be scared.
    She says of baby don't stop
    keep giving it to me, I am about to pop
    She start fucking back like crazy
    I say oh yea baby you are no fagazy
    She was fucking back fast as hell
    I was keeping up so I was doing pretty well
    She says oh baby you make me so hot
    Give me all you got
    I put her feet up at her head
    and drove that pussy through the bed
    Now we was fucking on the floor
    she says oh my god baby by reading your stories I should have known what I was in store for
    She starts cumming and starts screaming
    the whole time she is creaming
    I still tried to hammer her pussy through the floor
    She say oh baby I do not want any more
    I should guess what I was in store for
    By reading what you write
    I should have know you can go all night
    I say yea that is nothing but a thing
    I know how to make a woman sing
    she says yea that you do
    you really know how to screw
    I hold her in my arms the rest of the night
    squeezing her ever so tight
    She says I never want you to let me go
    that is all I know
    she says you really love me don't you
    I said yea I most certainly do.
    I love you I love you I love you
    yes I most definitely do.
    I hold her tight
    for the rest of the night.

    If god told me I had to loose one of my senses to be with you
    I would be so confused I wouldn't know what to do.
    I wouldn't want to loose my touch
    because that would be just too much
    I wouldn't be able to feel you skin
    and that my baby would be a sin
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
    I wouldn't want to loose my hearing
    because I would never here your cheering
    I couldn't never hear you sweet sweet voice
    God please do not make me make this choice
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
    I wouldn't want to loose my sight
    because I wouldn't be able to see your beauty and have delight
    I wouldn't be able to see your sweet sweet face
    and that would be a disgrace
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
    I wouldn't want to loose my smell
    because then I couldn't smell your sweet sweet odor that well
    I wouldn't be able to smell your perfume
    when you come into the room
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
    I wouldn't want to loose my taste
    because that would be a waste
    I wouldn't be able to taste your sweet sweet skin
    And I want to be able to taste you Again and again
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
    I would rather loose one of my arms
    than to loose my senses and not be able to love all your charms
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
     
  2. Bluesy

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    GentleManSteve, I thank you for sharing
    GentleManSteve, to publically display your work is daring
    GentleManSteve, I have greatly enjoyed your rhymes
    GentleManSteve, I hope you'll post more sometime :)
     
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    Thanks Bluesy. I am glad you greatly enjoyed my rhymes. I t means a lot to me that a female thinks my poems is good.

    Thanks a lot for your most kind words.

    I hope to post some more soon.