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  1. mrcock

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    design is green with pink
    the forum is about a kink

    :lol
     
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    I am the joker to your Bruce Wayne
    I've been declared clinically insane
    I've been physically restrained
    I'd like to see the world burn but for now I'll just refrain
     
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    Oh man what pain :eek
     
  4. mrcock

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    just where are you, I am so lonely
    I go like that forever, losin only
    part that left of what I had before, I'm changing
    I'm not the same I was before, I'm rearranging
    into something different, forever lost in boredom
    things just go different, it's not the lonliness
    that fucks me up, but helplessness I always get in shit
    now there is no way outta that, I'm dead

    forever now, I can't escape
    if I'll escape, it's rather luck
    just something I don have
    the pressure I can't take
    I jus go on
    I can't, though I jus take
    I jus go on

    I never had the opportunity to show that I jus can be civilized as well
    jus everyday I get attacked
    whenever I do show the civilized way of how shit is done the different way
    I jus get blamed for bein jus too civilized
     
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  5. mrcock

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    since I get banned from a different places
    I do migrate from a time to time
    since I right now have a no replacement
    I guess I'll bore you with these rhymes
    I'm kicked, I'm beaten, go away
    that's what they say from a time to time
    I have this habit to freestyle, that's why
    I write it here, I can't deny
    it just doesn't feels the same to do it privately
    so publicly I start it here, right now
    I feel a little scared, so I just drop it
    no explanation, no nothing, just rhymes
    so ignore it, as I just gotta leave it somewhere
    so afterwards I feel so fine, amazing
    with you the victims of to read it
    or to ignore it instead
     
  6. mrcock

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    say, shall I continue at a blog or something
     
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    The third quatrain was written half-assed.

    If soon winter is to be upon us
    And the biting cold will keep us at bay
    Nature's time, we pray, will shun bitter lust
    For the ground kisses the sky, and night- day

    Winter, we beg, oh so pretty and cold
    Comparible to oh so few, we see
    Forsake not your subjects, the young or old
    For beauty and wisdom fortell prophecy

    With eyes that both ignite the morning sun
    And hair that flows to cool the burning moon
    I'd rather eat the last of every crumb
    By the biting embrace of your monsoon

    Oh, says the majestic day, this lover
    Is not mere lust, it's the end of summer
     
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    Alice, Alice
    The Queen has snapped
    Now it's off with your head
    You better turn back

    This world is a lie
    Don't look any further
    It's all in your mind
    You mustn't go deeper

    Forget this place
    Let us fade away
    And all the nightmares
    Before you go insane

    Alice, oh Alice
    My love was true
    Though only in your mind
    But that's nothing new

    Be a strong girl
    Now go on, let go
    You won't fall far
    Please find your way home

    We'll always be here
    Just please don't come back
    You're mind will shatter
    And we can't have that
     
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    "Fair Use;" Parody lyrics:
    Picture yourself in a dive with a dance-floor,
    You're watching a cowgirl with marshmallow-thighs,
    Stepping & whirling, she's wearing no undies,
    Her skirt flies incredibly high...:)

    YMMV; in my world it's quite a pleasant mental picture!
     
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    don't you see
    that i am me
    for i can see
    that you are we

    fdw 5/3/13
     
  11. mrcock

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    irony, that I am still breathing, as most of them just wanna kill me
    tragedy, to see all of the attempts of mine to fail, all of the energy
    is gone, where am I moving, what will I reach, ignoring the pleasures
    of today, I am so far away, from the place I started at, just like
    I am far away from the place I am going to, this endless journey would
    either end when I would realize I am just too old to move on, or simply
    die, leaving nothing that just could ever say that I ever existed
    sorrow, is what I feel, as helplessness is a most common feeling
    I know, pain, the quantity of mine is giant, I have nothing even
    to compare it with, not even with ma hate, anger, which are simply giant
    I am moving nowhere, love to lie to maself, like if I can reach it, I will die while moving, I am a fighter training everyday, who'll never have a single fight, I am a poet getting entertained from ma own rhymes, ma way is long, I'll die alone, I'll never reach the place I am moving to, guess it will end while I'd still be moving, never reaching a place I am going to, never having a success, knowing just the negativity
    which is nothing but a lack of the positivity, while being forever trapped in this cage that was built for me by the reality
     
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    MrCock....I like your poems. Have you ever tried to write music? I think you would be good at creating lyrics for your own music.
     
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    this night was just amazing
    I am too jealous to say why
    the constant war is still here
    though I am high, I fly
     
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    exploding from the energy, what am I gonna do
    I am free, or insane, or what, dunno what to say
    dunno what to do, if I'd do just what I wanna
    perhaps I'd be just fucking your mama, or your sister
    or some mister, or some lady, perhaps I am a gay already
    though dunno about it all yet, or am I just fucked up
    at the head, like long ago now, I am so fucking tired
    of this slow speed, accelerate, that's what I wanna do, hate
    kill, dominate, rape, that's right, bitches, ya take me seriously
    fear me, ya bitches, cause I gotta be fucking dangerous when
    I am hysterical, like right about now, though never been charged
    convicted, so, perhaps you have nothing to worry about
    perhaps, I am just a shit talker I am, or perhaps
    I am just a man ah
     
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    Legs spred
    Toes curled back
    Back arched
    Moan and gasp

    Biting lips
    A tantric kiss
    Muffled screams
    Time to please

    Bodies shake
    The bed quakes
    Muscles tighten
    The pleasure's heightened

    Thrusting, bucking
    And hair pulling
    Biting, licking
    Complete pure ecstasy

    Pulling close
    In and out
    Scream, shout
    Sweat pours down

    Clawing, scratching
    With erratic breathing
    Pulsing, throbbing
    Our love mingling

    Teasing, pleasing
    Our bodies tingling
    Touching, feeling
    Climax and releasing
     
  16. mrcock

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    dunno if ma opinion would change or something, but right now I love it

    aahahahahaahahhaa
     
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    lonely again, in the night and the day
    I'm dreaming of someone who will take me away
    from these troubles, from this pain
    from the reality that makes me go insane

    ah I miss you, but who are you
    ah I wanna you
    ah I wanna kiss you
    ah I so miss you

    lonely nights and lonely days
    what have I done to deserve all this
    I feel like I'm getting older
    it's over, it's over

    ah I so miss you, but who are you
    ah I wanna kiss you, wanna run to you
    wanna hide in you
    wanna kiss you

    these lonely days and these lonely nights
    I wanna get away, I wanna hide
    I wanna reach for the stars
    instead I have all ma body in scars

    ah baby I so miss you, I so wanna kiss you
    ah baby it's been so long til I had a reason to smile
    ah or was there ever this kinda time

    I'm so lonely, I wanna die
    I'm so lonely, I'm so lonely
    I'm so lonely, I wanna die
    from a heart attack

    so being all alone, I wanna ma baby death to visit me
    I don wanna waste no time, just kiss me, just kiss me
    give me something that I wanna, it's a heart attack
    take ma pain to yourself, as I'm getting dead

    getting dead, getting dead, getting rotten
    I'm forever lost, I'm forever forgotten
    getting dead, getting dead, I'm so rotten
    forever, forever, forever forgotten

    like I never existed, like I never had this pain
    like I never wanted to get away outta here forever
    forever, forever, forever, forever, forever, forever, forever
    forever, forever, forever, forever

    ah