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  1. Darkesheart

    Darkesheart New Member

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    I couldn't find the other thread, Perhaps I just misplaced it or something. I don't know... So I started a new one.



    In shadows I walk
    In light I hide
    I have strayed
    From my path
    Hope is gone
    I have lost my way

    But as I return
    To new faces and old
    I seek those
    That knew me best
    To bide my time with
    Before I disappear

    Shadows are comforting
    They do not judge
    They embrace
    A cold hand
    With no guilt
    No remorse

    So now I return
    To the life I once led
    To the judgements
    That once condemned me
    To sorrow
    To solitude

    In shadows I walk
    In light I hide
    I have strayed
    From my path
    Hope is gone
    I have lost my way
     
  2. Darkesheart

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    My life in ruins.
    My heart in shambles.
    My body lies broken,
    and forgotten on the ground.
    Everything I do is wrong,
    everyday brings a new fight.
    A past that forever haunts me,
    A future that held such promise.
    Lost in the darkness,
    solitude my friend,
    no right way is clear.
    Alone I wait for the one,
    the one who can show me the light.
    Until that time,
    Solitude is my only friend.
     
  3. Darkesheart

    Darkesheart New Member

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    Eternal life in all its Accursedness
    Looking back, upon that day
    Sometimes I wish, I chose the other way
    But my actions choices made, not to be taken away
    Crimes accomplished, cruelties done
    Some done for need, some for fun
    Acts of kindness were there too
    But sorrows were many, Happiness few
    When I woke up, all was gone
    All I knew, had been proven wrong
    Lives destroyed by my hand
    Death, a blissful release
    Cursed to forever roam the land
    Growing in power, anger, and grief.
    People come and people go
    Lives are lost and young ones grow
    Time moves on through the flow
    Wars are lost and wars are won
    Their lives are changed when all is done
    Mountains grow and streams erode
    Valleys sink and trees will show
    I sit unchanged as time flows by
    I have seen this all and watch as it goes awry
    Rocks will fall and fires erupt
    Landscapes change and cities go up
    I watch them grow and watch them die
    Loves are lost, my heart, is dry
     
  4. Darkesheart

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    I still feel like a little kid
    Tiptoeing up the stairs
    Why do I still run that last few feet
    When I know nothing’s there?

    All this time and all I’ve learned
    Hasn’t made me feel any older
    When I look out into the dark
    I sure don’t feel any bolder

    So don’t take away my night-light now
    I need it more than ever
    Don’t take away my night-light now
    Those bad dreams ain’t gettin any better

    I just want to make-believe
    Lying nestled under my covers
    But it seems like the whole world is yelling,
    “Get up, cause play time’s over”

    But what if I’m still that little girl
    Clutching her teddy bear?
    I know where I’m supposed to be going
    It’s just takin me awhile to get there

    So don’t take away my night-light now
    The shadows will come to get me
    Don’t take away my night-light now
    Cause on my own I still can’t see

    I’m sorry but no matter how I try
    My room will always be a mess
    And when I pick you flower’s I’ll always think
    Those dandelions are as pretty as the rest

    And no matter how sad or tired I get
    I’ll know that laughter can cure all pain
    I’ll always run outside with bare feet
    And never wear a coat in the rain

    So don’t take away my night-light now
    Let me keep it awhile longer
    I know that I will make you proud
    But I need it until I’m stronger

    Don’t take away my night-light now
    There’ll be time for all that later
    Someday I’ll put it out myself
    But not til my dreams are tamer
     
  5. AnonymousOne

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    All right ... I'll add to this morose thread...

    Flickers


    I know not what the fates spin into my life.
    I know that I can only carry on, as I have before.
    Life goes, babe, it blows my mind out the back of my skull,
    Fills me with memories of a life not mine.

    What I see is a father leaving, a mother crying,
    People, all around me, dying and I simply carry on.
    I turn my back on all the chaos that whirls ‘round me.
    Enough of it, Throw out all your dreams.

    I stroll through the stalks of lives, stroking leaves.
    And the field of people ends in a wasteland.
    The memories flow back and I stagger on. Oblivious,
    I rage at what I am hopeless to control at all.

    Life is but a journey with no end but it’s own.
    And we all stumble, while we wander, alone.
    I’ve risen above the common man, but I’m no Olympian
    I’m just here to walk, walk among you.

    Reality slams home like a truck hitting a crow.
    And the feathers are my dreams, they float on air,
    Ebony flickers in the winds, to touch someone.
    Though I know your end, I cannot know my own.
     
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    Hmmm...one I wrote a while back that's inspired by Thorin's books (Stalking the Flock, A Wolf In Wolf's Clothing, and Bullets)

    Breaking Free

    I can hear the wolves' calls
    They taunt this dog on his chain
    Collar digs deep into well kept fur
    Bindings snap tight as I begin to strain

    Whores of the flock try to hold on
    I face their opposition with with laws of the pack
    I'm better than this, they'll no longer own me
    Claws elongate and eyes darken to black

    I can now be with my own kind as
    Chain breaks after a hard won fight
    Misfits one and all, welcomed with open arms
    A pack of diversity cuts through the night
     
  7. Puss_in_boots

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    Here's a good one:

    An Irish Airman foresees his Death

    I KNOW that I shall meet my fate
    Somewhere among the clouds above;
    Those that I fight I do not hate
    Those that I guard I do not love;
    My country is Kiltartan Cross,
    My countrymen Kiltartan’s poor,
    No likely end could bring them loss
    Or leave them happier than before.
    Nor law, nor duty bade me fight,
    Nor public man, nor cheering crowds,
    A lonely impulse of delight
    Drove to this tumult in the clouds;
    I balanced all, brought all to mind,
    The years to come seemed waste of breath,
    A waste of breath the years behind
    In balance with this life, this death.

    W.B. Yeats
     
  8. Darkesheart

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    She approaches the mirror clad only in a mask
    A great fantastical thing of feathers and pearls
    False beauty running deeper than the skin
    She has fooled her reflection once again.

    Waiting in the chamber is her greatest fear
    Occupying her very bed
    Breathing her very air
    Waiting, watching for the slightest misstep.

    He sleeps, and she watches
    He wakes, and she smiles
    He leaves, and she cries
    And the mask falls to pieces on the floor undone.

    Evening passes and the sun’s ray shine upon her upturned face
    Striking crystals of light from the tears upon her cheeks
    And turning her hair into a golden halo
    She looks at the mirror, and she laughs, as she fools her reflection once again.
     
  9. GentleManSteve

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    I am in love with a very wonderful girl
    The love I have for her makes my head whirl
    I get sick if I do not get a chance to chat
    If I could reach the sky and space my love is way beyond all of that
    Kind of hard to express my love and to tell her how I really feel
    Loosing her love will make me cry out and squeal
    If I ever lost her my heart would be broken
    I would cry so much my pillar would be soaken
    I know I would cry my eyes out
    I know I love her and that is no doubt
    My love for her will always be here
    It will last year after year
    I hope I do not have to go through life without her love
    When I chat with her I feel like I am on the wings of a dove
    Lifting me up above the earth
    My love has given me a new meaning to live and I feel like I had a rebirth
    I feel like a baby again being lifted up by his mother arms
    I love her, her personality and her charm
    She is such a wonderful creature
    She has taught me to love again like she was my teacher
    I will be a good student and listen very well
    I do not want to give my big farewell so her class I will have to fail
    I will have to take her class over and over again
    I am in love with the teacher and wants more then to be her friend
    I hope to meet her after class
    And tell her I do not want to pass
    I want to be her student for the rest of my life
    And ask her to be my wife
    I will say baby with your heart so bright
    will you be my wife this very night
    I so desperately hope she will say yes
    because I want her love and I do not want anything less
    I will not settle for being just her friend
    I want our love to never come to its end
    I want to be with her till the end of time and beyond
    I know it will last because my love is an unbreakable bond
    I love you baby doll
    Hope you know my love will never break down and fall
    I love you for who you made me
    I love all so please baby do not flea
    I do not care if I have to get to your house walking a 100 mile walk
    I will scream my love for you till I can not talk
    I will scream my love from the roof top
    I will scream till the neighbors tell mt to stop
    I want to tell the whole world about my baby
    I will tell everybody and that is no buts or any maybe
    I will tell everybody and that is a fact
    I will act like a fool for your love and over react
    I love you and that includes everything about you
    I will never quit loving you no matter what you say or do
    I will keep loving you till the cows come home
    And since I do not have cows to roam
    We do not have to worry about calling it quits
    Get use to my love because it is as strong as it gets
    Babe you better get use to me being around
    What ever you do, do not ever try to write my love down
    It would take way to long
    because my love is way to strong
    I want you to hear what I am saying
    baby I love you and I am not playing
    Please do not ever say you will hurt me not even a maybe
    becuase loosing you will make me cry like a baby
    Listen to the truth of my words
    It sounds like the singing of love birds
    I do not want to stop this rhyming
    3:30 now and I am loosing my timing
    Hurting not seeing you on at all
    You have put my back up against the wall
    I want to be here when you come on
    but it is boring sitting her all alone
    I know I hurt you and that is killing me
    If you want me to set you free
    Please keep it to yourself
    Because I promise I can love you till I have nothing left.
    I will love you till I break down and cry
    Please baby do not ever tell me bye
     
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    It is hard to tell you how I truly feel
    Truth is I need your loving to keep from feeling ill
    Days I do not get to talk I feel sick to my stomach
    When we do talk I feel like I'm on mount Everest all the way at the summit
    Taking in the view on the highest mountain on earth
    Breathing in the cold air and feeling like I have just seen a childs birth
    But the the birth I wittiness was my own
    Witnessing the birth of my love has come over me like a cyclone
    I can not express in words this awesome feeling
    But I use to be sad and lonely but with you my heart has started back healing
    Never thought I would ever meet somebody like you
    But I prayed every day for it to come true
    Now my prayers are coming together
    Nothing will ever take you away not even the worst of weather
    When I take a big breath of air and smell all the flowers and grass
    I think about you and just know I have found love at last
    A love I want to last forever and ever
    Our love can go on and on and on and on and on baby that is our endeavor
    Walk this path that God has laid out befor us
    My love is higher than it ever was and need you to give it a trust
    Baby my love is hear to stay
    Nothing will ever tear it down no how or no way
    I will fight the fight that life has to offer
    I will get a hole in one every time like a skilled golfer
    Now that I am comparing my love to a game of golf
    If I put my ball of love one the tee Tiger Woods wouldn't be able to knock if off
    No matter how many times he takes a swing
    He will yell out I can not even budge this damn thing
    Time after time he will try to knock it
    Little does he know it can not even be up rooted with a missile and a rocket
    I do not care how many times he swings that club
    He will yell out I can not budge this ball of love
    That ball of love will not even be moved by a bull dozer
    Because it is in an unbreakable enclosure
    Now if I take my club of love and swing that ball will go sailing
    But like a lost letter it will return after it has been mailing
    It will return straight to your heart
    Just like it was sent from cupid's dart
    It will never be defiling
    My love will always keep you smiling
    That is no if ands or butts
    My love has blood tears and guts
    Baby I hope you know
    My love will be strong like a never ending river flow
    carving its path in the earth as it goes all the way to the ocean
    My love has a never ending passion and devotion
    I know our love is an unbreakable bond
    If I ever lost your love I would be lost in the great beyond
    Not really existing just being in despair
    Crying out without any prayer
    to hurt to even think
    In the ocean or despair I would just sink
    I would just sink like a rock to the bottom of the deepest part
    I will yell out God please mend my broken heart
    I will just hear him say just open your eyes
    I open my eyes to a great surprise
    I look at a picture of you just standing there
    God says My child why the despair
    She loves you more than anything or anybody ever before
    I brought you two together for ever more
    Now sit up and take notice
    and tell her you will be the devotest
    Tell her you will devote all your time to pleasing her
    And be honest and say I can not promise that hard times will not occure
    But tell her no matter what life throws at you
    Your love will see it through
    Tell her how true your love really is
    She will know your love is true and seal it with a kiss like this
    God kissed me on my forehead
    Without any words or anything said
    I knew in my heart that we are meant to be together
    When God sealed our love with a kiss on the wings of a doves feather
    He lifted my despair and gave me new hope
    To climb this mountain no matter how steep the slope
    I will climb mount Everest all the way to the summit
    And just float into space and catch a commit
    I will ride it straight back to your heart
    And reinsure you nothing can ever tear our love apart
    I will tell you everything god said
    And How he sealed our love with a kiss to my forehead
    And I will seal it to with a kiss to yours
    I will let you know you are the only one I adores
    I will tell you how true my love really is
    But you will know because I just sealed it with a kiss like this
    I will reseal it every day of my life
    I will say will you be my wife
    But our love will even go into the great beyond
    Because God sealed it with an unbreakable bond
    Baby please understand my love is so so real
    And it will last because with a kiss everyday I will reseal
    I will reinsure you I will always be yours
    And everyday I will reseal any emotional sores
    I am here for the long haul
    My love will never be torn down like the great wall
    Baby I am yours for the taking
    Want to marry so I can see you every morning when I am waking
    I want to be able to look you in the face
    and give you a strong embrace
    Want to squeeze you tight my whole life
    and reinsure you everyday I want you as my wife
    I can really go one for hours telling you how I really feel
    Just hope you know our love has an unbreakable seal
    I would like to go on a little longer
    Baby just know there is no love stronger
    Than mine is for you and yours is for mine
    Our heart is like one that is twine
    I really do not want to stop telling you how strong my love is but I think you know
    I want you and never ever want to let you go
    I will end this rhyme for now
    But my heart will never stop loving you and take a never ending vow
     
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    when you kiss me
    At that time I feel so free
    When our lips finally met
    I could not resist how I felt when your moist lips made mine wet
    I to could feel my chest pounding with every beat of my heart
    At that time I knew I want you and never wanted us to part
    Your and my lips didn't stop at our lip
    As we explored each others body all we could do is pull the covers with every grip
    We knew great lovers can do more than one thing at one time
    We know when you make love it should be so sublime
    When the wetness of my lips touch every part of your naked skin
    I knew by your movements you wanted me to lick certain parts again
    Since I aim to please
    I dotted all the I's and crossed all the T's
    You knew when we made love
    pleasing you was the only thing I was thinking of
    With every lick of my tongue and ever stroke of my hand
    All your wishes was at my command
    It wasn't any part of your flesh that I wasn't aware of
    I touched it all with tender love
    It was times you moved to the rhythmic motion of my every move
    I knew by your reactions if you disapprove or approve
    As we got deeper and deeper into love making
    I knew it was time when you griped my arms with your legs and started shaking
    I knew without any words said
    I knew you loved it with no nod of your head
    You loved the way I touched every part of your sweet naked skin
    And also loved when I knew when to do something again
    Without any words to tell me anything at all
    I just knew when you liked something by what I saw
    I knew When it was all said and done
    Your heart was won
    I knew by the way you basted in the pleasure
    You had a treasure
    And the way I did the same
    That you also added to the flame
    The flame of our desire
    was hotter than any fire
    The sun itself couldn't hold a candle
    Because we both game more than we could handle
    As I laid there looking into your eyes
    We knew we would never again say our good-byes
     
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    I know a girl
    She hasn't said it but she really wants me to rock her world
    I know she does I can see it in her eyes
    she wants me down between her thighs
    But enough with this thing
    let me tell you how I make women sing
    First I kiss and suck on her lips
    while running my hands up and down her sides with my finger tips
    I then kiss and suck on her neck a while
    I know she likes this because she gives me a smile
    I then move to her tit
    and kiss, lick, and suck on them a little bit
    She is liking this I know because she is having a fit
    I can really tell she is loving it
    because I got my fingers on her clit rubbing it
    She opens her eyes open wide
    and says I want you deep inside
    I said in due time
    because I want to make you chime
    I move down to her belly button and flick my tongue in and out
    she is loving this there is not doubt.
    She grabs my head and gives it a guide
    and says I want your tongue deep inside
    I stick my tongue in just a little bit
    she said come on baby stick it all the way in my slit
    I start tongue fucking her pussy hard and fast
    I even went down and tongue fucked her ass.
    She gave my head a little guide
    and says come on baby I want you back inside
    I start tongue fucking her pussy fast and hard
    she goes limp and drops her guard
    I know she is loving it now
    because I can here her moaning and saying wow
    She says oh baby that feels so good
    I say I know baby I eat pussy like I know I should
    she grabs my head and screams don't stop
    I am almost at the top
    I was ramming my tongue all the way in
    I was ramming it all the way to my chin
    She starts gasping for air
    and says don't stop baby I am almost there
    She starts humping at a fast pace
    then she cums all over my face
    She says god damn that was so good
    I said I know baby, I do it like I know I should.
    She says don't tease
    give me your dick please
    I say in good time
    then I will make you chime
    I move to her clit
    and lick and suck on it a little bit
    She says oh god damn that feels like nothing I have ever felt
    I know she is liking this because she is starting to melt
    I start finger fucking her pussy like no other
    She starts screaming and her body begins to shudder
    I speed you with the fingering, licking and sucking
    She starts moaning loud as hell and really begin to start bucking
    She starts screaming something fearous
    she was screaming so loud I thought somebody was going to hear us
    yeah she was screaming real real loud
    I thought the the planes was going to hear us in the cloud
    She start bucking her pussy on my fingers and face
    as I begin to lick, suck and finger at a faster pace
    she grabs my head and screams as she orgasms
    I know she liked it because she starts going into spasms
    I run my fingers in her pussy and on her clit
    and sucked her cum off my fingers a little bit
    She says oh my god that was hot
    now please give me what you got
    I say not yet I want to massage your G-Spot
    She said I thought that is what you just done
    I said yeah it was but I want to make you bust out like a cannon
    I put a lot or pressure on her gspot inside
    As I press harder her eyes open wide
    I say hey baby you like it
    she says hell yeah and I want you to play with my clit
    I am pressing hard on her G-Spot and clit like an expert
    I was thinking I am really going to make this girl squirt
    She begins to scream and starts bucking like a wild horse
    she is bucking back with all her force
    She is loving this I really can tell
    She says you do this very well
    I say tell me something I do not know
    I know how to satisfy a pussy hole
    She says don't stop I am almost at the summit
    I said baby I am going to make you bust out like a commit
    She says oh no I have a strong urge to pee
    I say it ain't pee so let it go all over me
    I said it is pussy juice
    so let it bust loose
    She is still screaming and starts cumming like Niagara Falls
    she squirts all over the bed and all over the walls
    she drenched me from my head to me feet
    She says oh god damn baby I think I am in heat
    please baby please baby give me your meat
    I said yea that was just icing on the cake
    Now it is time to give you my tube steak
    I stick my dick inside
    and open her pussy up wide
    she says give it to me all the way to your balls
    I don't want a little bit I want it all
    I shoved it all the way in where my belly was slamming against her clit
    I know she is liking it because her pussy is starting to spit
    She is bucking back like a wild bull
    I look in her eyes and say I am about to take you to school
    I looked in her eyes
    and I seen surprise
    She was amazed at what I was doing
    I was giving her a damn good screwing
    She grabs my arm
    and says you are fucking me like a thunder storm
    She says fuck me as fast as you can
    I want to snap back like the rubber band man
    I say hold on here I go
    I am going to try to demolish that pussy hoe
    I start fucking her pussy fast and hard
    I fucked it so hard I thought it was going to be scared.
    She says of baby don't stop
    keep giving it to me, I am about to pop
    She start fucking back like crazy
    I say oh yea baby you are no fagazy
    She was fucking back fast as hell
    I was keeping up so I was doing pretty well
    She says oh baby you make me so hot
    Give me everything all you got
    I put her feet up at her head
    and drove that pussy through the bed
    Now we was fucking on the floor
    she says oh my god baby I never would have imagine what I was in store for
    She starts cumming and starts screaming
    the whole time she is creaming
    I still tried to hammer her pussy through the floor
    She says oh baby lets do it once more
    I will keep a long story short and just say by the time we finished she was sore
    She said when you said what you could do I just said yeah right
    I would have never guessed that you could go all night
    I say yeah that is nothing but a thing
    I will do anything to make a woman sing
    she says yea that you do
    you really know how to screw
    I know she was surprised that I could go all night
    Plus I fucked her with all my might
    She says I wish we could go again
    I smile and begin to stick my dick back in
    I could not believe this girl could handle all this and not pass out
    But I didn't care I was going to show her what it was all about
    We went just a little bit longer
    I showed her I was just a bit stronger
    She says oh my god baby I really like fucking you
    I said yeah baby I know you do.
    she said I want to fuck you fuck you fuck you fuck you
    I say yeah I do to.
    She grabs my dick and squeezes it tight
    As the night passes into daylight.
    I say don't tell me you want to do what we just done
    She says hell no I just want to cuddle with someone
    We just laid there basking in the pleasure
    I held her tight because I knew I had a treasure
     
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    I am in love with a girl for goodness sake
    I love her so much and loosing her would make my heart break
    I love her so much she is always on my mind
    I love her so much and it is putting my heart in a bind
    I long after her sweet embrace
    and I wonder if I will ever be able to kiss her sweet smiling face
    I do not believe she knows how much I love her
    The truth is I love her and never want to see her with another
    I love her and that is plain to see
    What really hurts is she might not always feel the same way about me
    She might not always feel the same way I do
    I just hope she knows that my love is very very true
    I plan on never ever hurting her again
    I wish she knew that I really want to be more than her friend
    I want to grab her up and hold her tight all night in each others arms
    I really believe our love can withstand the stormiest of all storms
    I believe our love could be stronger than all the powers of the universe
    I know she loves me forever and always and have loved me from the first
    I do not know if she knows what to believe
    I just hope she knows that living without her touch is making my heart grieve
    I hope she knows I can love her till I have nothing left
    I just wish we will meet soon so we can be all bye ourself
    I just wish I do not have to wait too much longer
    I just wish she knows our love could be no wronger
    I know she probably believes I write these poems to be romantic
    But the truth is, just to be with her I would swim across the Atlantic
    I know I wouldn't make it without drowning
    But she would at least know I really loved her and I wasn't just clowning
    I wish she knows I will love her until I take my last breath
    But my love for her will even go beyond death
    I will still love her even when I am in the grave
    I hope she knows my love will never give in and cave
    I will keep after her till the end of time
    I won't even quit then I won't quit till she is all mine
    I hope she knows my love is here to stay
    I do not care what anybody has to say
    I am going to love her any way
    I am going to do whatever it takes
    because I know our love is not a bunch of mistakes
     
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    Just sitting here thinking about you and decided to write
    I tried so hard to stop thinking of you but I just laid there thinking of you all night
    I know you know that I care
    I hope you know that loosing you I will not be able bare
    I hope one day I can hear you say the word love
    I will always love your loving nature and everything else above
    I love the way we talk for hours and hours
    Just know I will stick by your side and not be like some of the other cowards.
    I promise to be with you always and forever
    Loving you will be my endeavor
    I will look at it like a never ending love story
    Just know my love will be steady and I will not be in a hurry
    I will take my time to love you and show you the respect a woman deserves
    I promise to always love you and never try to get on your nerves
    My love will last and last for all eternity and beyond
    Just know there will be no stronger love bond
    My love will not be torn down by argue wars
    because everyday I will seal any emotional sores
    Every day of my life I will tell you and show you my love is for real
    Every day of my life you will know how I feel
    Yes you will never have to guess
    Just know I will love you more and more not less and less
    My love bond will keep getting stronger everyday of my life
    Just know if I ever lost you it would cut my heart like a knife
    Yes it cut my heart all the way into
    Just know the love I have is for you and only you
    Just know I will never try to get somebody to take your place
    Because I will never be able to forget the memory of your face
    It will always be etched im my brain
    When I close my eyes It will always be my memory pain
    Your face will be etched always in my mind
    My heart will always be where your name is signed
    I will be forever yours and you will be forever mine
    Loosing you will never be something I will think is fine
    If I ever lost you I would loose all hope
    I need you in my life and please do not tell me nope
    I made a decision and I am sticking to my word
    Just know my love is stronger than you have ever heard
    I am making a promise to never hurt you
    I hope one day you can tell me that to
    There is a love that can withstand the trials and errors of time
    But there is no love stronger than yours and mine
    I will bet my life that what we have can last and last
    I am here for you for all time all you have to do is just ask
    My ears and heart is always open
    I promise with me your heart will never be broken
    I will seal any argues we may have
    My love will never leave an emotional scab
    It will always heal without any scars
    My heart is here for you just come in because my heart has no bars
    Just come in and make me happy
    I will always love you always even in the morning when your hair is nappy
    Yes every minute of every day
    I will love you any how or anyway
    I need to stop this poem before too long
    Just remember my love for you is ever so strong
    I am glad we are letting this go this far
    Just know I love you for who you are
    It has nothing to do with your beauty
    although you are a real cutie
    I love your loving nature and personality
    Oh yes I also love your morality
    Love you being so pure
    That is something I know for sure
    I close my eyes and picture your face and just ponder
    If I will ever have another just as fonder
    I knew then and I know now
    Your beauty is always something to make people say wow
    I know If I ever blow my chance with you
    Please always look past my face and tell me you want me too.
    Just do not look in the mirror at your beauty
    Just tell me loving me is what you want to be your duty
    Always run the race of love with me
    Leave behind all the junk and look at my heart and see what you see
    I know you are beautiful inside and out
    I know that and that is no doubt
    I know I will never be able to express your true beauty
    Just know that loving you will always be my duty
    It will always be a full time job
    Your love will never be something that will make sob
    I will never turn you away and always want to commune
    I will always love you from Sunlight to moon
    I will let you know everyday of my life
    That I love you love you love you my wife
    Loving you will always be my calling
    Just know it was you who stopped me from falling
    I was getting so tired and weary
    My life felt like some horror movie that was so eery
    It chilled me too the bone
    Baby i was just tired of being alone
    I can love you for all time and that I do swear
    Because you was the one who showed me that you did care
    Just know it was you that made me smile
    I wish we get together soon I promise to make it worth while
    Let me show you that I do care
    I think me and you will be a perfect pair
    Please believe me when I say You are always on my mind
    I can not ever forget you not now and any other time
    I know you know I want to make sweet passionate love to you
    And I know you want that too
    I know I maybe young and what not
    but I promise I will make love to you with everything I got
    I want to make you scream with pleasure
    When I finish I want you to hold me tight because you know you got a treasure
    Yes I want to make love to you again and again
    Yes baby I want our love making to have no end
    I promise to take it slow and easy at first
    I do not know if I will be the best but I promise never to be the worst
    But I promise to make you love every minute
    I want you to be happy because your life has me in it
    I promise to take it slow
    and go faster as we go
    I want you to scream with pleasure and I will not stop till you do
    I do not care if I have to make love the whole night through
    I will not stop till I know I have satisfied you
    I want you to tell me how it is feeling
    Just know I will not stop till I have you reeling
    I want you to have orgasm after orgasm
    I want to do it until your body goes into a spasm
    I promise to make you love it
    and believe me you will love every minute of it
    I want to make love to you baby
    And that is no ifs buts or any mayby
    Like I said I want to make sweet passionate love to you
    The whole night through
    I hope you want that too
    Do you?
     
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    She watched as he left to go off to war
    She cried thinking she might not be able to hold him any more
    He turned around and and waved bye till she was out of sight
    He tried to hold back the tears but lost that fight
    she waved back with tears in her eyes the whole time
    Remembering what he use to do when he came home and she jingled the wind chime
    Not knowing why she was doing it maybe good luck or something more
    She kept jingling the chimes till the truck went over the hill at the old convenient store
    She cried even much more when she couldn't see him wave
    She ran to her bath room at stared into the mirror where he use to shave
    As she kissed the mirror
    he some how felt a kiss on his cheek and he cried out I just want to see er
    He turned back around but she was out of view
    He stuck his head out the window and yelled out I love you
    Not knowing if she heard what he said
    She runs to the bedroom and jumps on the bed and buries her face in the pillow where he use to lay his head
    Night after night she laid on his side of the bed
    With her face buried in the pillow where he use to lay his head
    She felt so close to him at this time
    Wishing so much she could just hear that wind chime
    But it never chimed not even during wind storms
    She cried thinking she would never again be in his arms
    Months went by and she heard not a thing
    Summer turned into winter than it was spring
    Daily she would open a bottle of his cologne
    But one day was different she could tell as she smelled the scent she heard the ringing of the phone
    All the voice said on the other end was Baby I am coming home.
    She cried out I love you
    The voice said I love you to
    As she was eating breakfast like she did so many times before
    But she felt something wasn't right when She hears a knock at the door
    as she walked to the door she was thinking why she didn't hear the wind chime
    She was almost scared to open the door because she did not know what to expect this time
    As she slowly open it just far enough to see somebody in a military cloths arrayed with medals that dressed a distinguished looking gentleman
    As She opens the door and sees a flag folded in his hand
    She cries and drops to the floor
    The gentleman reaches out and pickes her up and closes the door
    He said sorry ma am but his convoy was ambushed and everybody is missing in action and assumed dead
    With out anything said she runs to the bed and buries her head in the pillow where he use to lay his head
    The gentleman comes into the doorway and says I am so sorry ma am as he handed out the American flag
    She looks up and says thanks and said this has a high priced tag
    For his country he gave his life
    and all you give is a flag to his wife
    Oh yeah and some medals for him being brave
    She gets up and runs to the mirror where he use to shave
    As she kisses the mirror
    She thinks that he is thinking of her and just want to see er
    Not really wanting to give up hope
    Every time she thinks of death she yells out nope nope nope
    days goes by then months without hearing the chimes
    She never gave up hope to hear them like she did so many times
    she kept up the same routine as she always did before
    Everything that helped her through the hard times while she was waiting for him to show up at her door
    Just because the gentleman said assumed dead
    She never gave up hope and kept death out of her head
    When she heard that a new president might bring everybody back home from the war
    She sit just waiting for him to walk through the door
    Never giving up hope and keeping death out of her mind
    Everyday she would look out her venetian blind
    As she was eating her dinner as she did so many times before
    She hears the chimes and a knock at the door
    She races to the door and it opens
    Her husband is there holding some roses but she can not say anything because she is choking
    Choking back on her tears she leeps into his arms and peppered his face with kiss after kiss
    He said you didn't miss
    That was all he could get out
    His lips started shivering and he started to pout
    He hugged her so so tight
    all that day and for the rest of the night
    He told her stories about him being a prisoner of war
    She said I never gave up hope I knew you would one day walk back through that door
    They lived a happy life from that moment on
    although this story has a happy ending some will not return home.
     
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    If god told me I had to loose one of my senses to be with you
    I would be so confused I wouldn't know what to do.
    I wouldn't want to loose my touch
    because that would be just too much
    I wouldn't be able to feel you skin
    and that my baby would be a sin
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
    I wouldn't want to loose my hearing
    because I would never here your cheering
    I couldn't never hear you sweet sweet voice
    God please do not make me make this choice
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
    I wouldn't want to loose my sight
    because I wouldn't be able to see your beauty and have delight
    I wouldn't be able to see your sweet sweet face
    and that would be a disgrace
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
    I wouldn't want to loose my smell
    because then I couldn't smell your sweet sweet odor that well
    I wouldn't be able to smell your perfume
    when you come into the room
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
    I wouldn't want to loose my taste
    because that would be a waste
    I wouldn't be able to taste your sweet sweet skin
    And I want to be able to taste you Again and again
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
    I would rather loose one of my arms
    than to loose my senses and not be able to love all your charms
    I am so confused I do not know what to do
    but I would have to loose something because I love you
     
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    When I am thinking about love
    You're the only one I am thinking of
    I just want to hold you tight
    I want to hold you till the moring light
    I don't even want to stop then
    I want to hold you till it is morning again
    Yeah yeah yeah I want to love you all night
    I want to love you till the moring light
    I don't even want to stop then
    I want to love you till it is morning again
    When I am thinking about love
    You're the only one I am thinking of
    I think about you every single day
    wishing my chest is where your head would lay
    I can't sleep when laying in my bed
    'cause I got memories of you running through my head
    I can not forget you no matter how hard I tried
    If I ever told you I didn't care, you would know I just lied
    baby holding you just won't do
    I want to make sweet passionate love to you
    When I am thinking about love
    You're the only one I am thinking of
    I do not want to sound naughty
    But I want to kiss your entire body
    I want to kiss you from your head to your feet
    Oh baby I think that would be so so sweet
    Kissing you all over is what I want to do
    baby I hope so dearly you want that to
    All I can do is just lay in bed wishing you was there
    hearing your sweet sexy voice in my ear telling me how much you care
    When I am thinking about love
    You're the only one I am thinking of
     
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    I can not look past your smiling face
    I will never be able to let you leave without a trace
    You have been the only one that really knew me at all
    I been hurting so much not being able to receive your call
    I will never be able to watch you just leave
    I can not even fathom the way I would grieve
    You have shared my laughter and my tears
    I can not even wonder how it would feel if you never did appear
    I would be the same old lonely sad depressed human
    But you have made me into a new man
    You have been the only one that really knew me at all
    I been hurting so much not being able to receive your call
    I can feel the hurt like my heart is just an empy space
    Seems like all I got left is a memory of your smiling face
    Yeah yeah yeah my heart is just and empty space
    I have lost you that that is what I have to face
    I wish you could just turn around
    Look at my tears running down
    Ohhhh ohhhh ohhhhh just turn around and watch me cry
    Should I feel this way ohh the hurt ohhh why ohhh why ohhh why
    Why should I feel this way
    Why do I feel like every time you say I love you it is April fools day
    You have been the only one that really knew me at all
    I been hurting so much not being able to receive your call
    Take a look at my heart because it is just an empty space
    I have nothing to remember me of you but the memory or your face
    Take a look at my heart it is just an empty space
    I am loosing you and that is what I have to face
    Take a good look at me standing here
    I just hurt knowing I am crying tear after tear
    I hope you can always be with me against all odds
    I hope you always know our love is a gift from the Gods
    Trusting me is the risk you need to take
    I always need your love so my heart does not continue to break
    Take a look at my heart it is just an empty space
    I am loosing you and that is what I have to face
    ooooh ooooh ooooh
    I can not look past your smiling face
    I will never be able to let you leave without a trace
    You have been the only one that really knew me at all
    I been hurting so much not being able to receive your call
    I will never be able to watch you just leave
    I can not even fathom the way I would grieve
    You have shared my laughter and my tears
    I can not even wonder how it would feel if you never did appear
    I would be the same old lonely sad depressed human
    But you have made me into a new man
    You have been the only one that really knew me at all
    I been hurting so much not being able to receive your call
    I can feel the hurt like my heart is just an empy space
    Seems like all I got left is a memory of your smiling face
    Yeah my heart is just and empty space
    I have lost you that that is what I have to face
    I wish you could just turn around
    Look at my tears running down
    Ohhhh just turn around and watch me cry
    Should I feel this way ohh the hurt ohhh why ohhh why ohhh why
    Why should I feel this way
    Why do I feel like every time you say I love you it is April fools day
    You have been the only one that really knew me at all
    I been hurting so much not being able to receive your call
    Take a look at my heart because it is just an empty space
    I have nothing to remember me of you but the memory or your face
    Take a look at my heart it is just an empty space
    I am loosing you and that is what I have to face
    Take a good look at me standing here
    I just hurt knowing I am crying tear after tear
    I hope you can always be with me against all odds
    I hope you always know our love is a gift from the Gods
    Trusting me is the risk you need to take
    I always need your love so my heart does not continue to break
    Take a look at my heart it is just an empty space
    I am loosing you and that is what I have to face
     
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    He who writes on bathroom walls,

    Rolls his shit in little balls.

    Them that reads his words of wit,

    Eats them little balls of shit.
     
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    I'm enthralled with your poetic imagery.
    Keep it rolling! :rofl