Poem: Fucking while seated. (feedback is highly appreciated)

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  1. Golden

    Golden New Member

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    I mainly posted this is an cypher kind of thing on another site, but i doubt i will get any feedback on it. Besides i wanted to share it with you guys and girls! Tell me what you think :)


    Fucking while seated

    After a party at the club we called it a night,
    took a cab home, not a single cloud in sight.
    The stars shone bright, delighful and romantic,
    The atmosphere was fabulous, truthfully; magic.
    I opened the door and my wife started to kiss me,
    Touched my dick and told me she missed me.
    I got the code, took off her clothes and confessed;
    Your beauty makes me want to put a hand on your breast.
    And get you undressed, kiss your body and chest,
    without stress, put my sex to test and leave the room in a mess.
    That got her obsessed and we went to the living room,
    I couldnt believe it was happening like when movies went digital.
    Shirt off, pants off, blow-job, hands down, spasms!
    Squirts on, intense! Next phase: multiple orgasms!
    Lapdance, romance, no pants, oh man, best sex ever,
    This night is forever, and it has barely started.. However;
    Hitting eachothers buttons all over the sofa cushion..
    Givin me so much head i thought she was goin to get a concussion.
    Then she started to elevate; stared into my eyes and masturbate,
    its a lovely fate; she sat ontop of me when we started to penetrate.
    I entered her easily, descretely with sexually tendencies,
    It was safe sex without talkin bout pills to prevent pregnancies.
    Couldnt ignore the look in her eyes as she rode me,
    We explore the hardcore and went both for the trophy.
    In this position we got well treated, the situation is heated,
    fucking while seated like it was a beast we wanted defeated.
    Her moans got me hotter while she was sliding my 'Jones',
    these powerful storms destroys the most beautiful poems.
    Im bout to blast off a thick load while touching her rack,
    she screamed and got off while she clinged to my back.
    I howld for her name as my orgasm went stronger,
    I told my dear in the ear; dont know if i can last any longer.
    I was wrong, we kept goin n' goin' on makin lots of sound,
    Till i laid on my back and she was slowin it down.
    Both was covered in sweat, wet of fluids from sex and worn out,
    Then she whispered in my ear; ''tomorrow lets pretend your a boy scout''
     
  2. piratenegro

    piratenegro New Member

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    haha, nice! I love it!
     
  3. Barbwire

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    That was great, I loved how it just rocked and grooved along.

    Do you have any others?
     
  4. quikki

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    That was an excellent poem!