Hardly erotic but here goes

Discussion in 'Erotic Literature' started by phil anderer, Jun 24, 2009.

  1. phil anderer

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    I woke up next to you this morning
    I held you tightly in my arms
    And felt your heart beat in rhythm with mine as you slept
    And the daylight crept
    Through the darkness as you breathed
    And I believed I was the luckiest man alive
    To have your love
    And as your eyes opened and the recognition dawned across your face
    Your smile lit up the room
    And you kissed me
    And told me you had missed me as you slept
    And we wept tears of joy at being together
    And as the tears formed a stream
    I awoke from my dream
    And into the reality of another day.:(:(
     
  2. north

    north New Member

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    What a tender and melancholy declaration of the spirit of true love.
    Absolutely beautiful.
     
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    Absolutely lovely - good job!:tup
     
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    Very nice poem.
    Truly captures the essence of waking next to a loved one. :)