Haiku

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    Haiku is one of the most important form of traditional Japanese poetry. Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. Haiku are short poems that use sensory language to capture a feeling or image. They are often inspired by an element of nature, a moment of beauty, or another poignant experience. Haiku poetry was originally developed by Japanese poets, and the form was adopted (and adapted) by virtually every modern language, including our own.

    Write your own Haiku.

    Example:
    Sexual Forums
    All things said by all of us
    Nothing left, all said
     
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    Sunny Day
    Lots of heat
    no heat at all

    I guess no huh?
     
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    Sun high in sky
    Me naked in yard
    Why are cops on porch
     
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    Haka another rhythmic variant ;)

     
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    From whore to dave
    The cave money saved
    To the hermit dave.

    excerpts form
    The book of Dog E Ryders
    Meaningless drivel and other useless
    Horseshit
     
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    Must be in the format of:
    5 syllables
    7 syllables
    5 syllables
     
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    5 syllables
    7 syllables
    5 syllables
     
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    No no no no no
    No no no no no no no
    No no no no no
    My get out if bed haiku
     
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    My china is blue
    Want to add cream to the bowl
    Where are you China_Blue?
     
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    Clever
     
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    Haiku's not easy
    I can't make anything scan
    Stupid syllables
     
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    If anyone needs help counting syllables, every time your chin goes down when you say the word, it's a new syllable.
     
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    Haiku police
    Fuckin with me once again
    Still added nothing
     
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    I know more than a few whose chins drop alot and never say a word.......
     
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    What is with this thread?
    Are we all really so bad
    at counting things out?
     
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    I wrote the next line
    Both auf Deutsch and en Fran├žais
    Am I good or what?
     
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    I like to recive anal
    In my ass and not my mouth
    It makes my cock hard
     
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    Writing Haiku sucks
    For the rules As Cartman says
    Screw you guys going home

    :D:p
     
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    Love can suck my ass
    Best if given and received
    I like to be fucked
     
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    Just rolled out of bed
    Looks like rain again today
    Let's go roll a joint
     
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