Cabin fun

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  1. Zazzles

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    This is only our third story, give us some feedback please :) more to come if people are enjoying :)


    So, recently we went away for the weekend to do some sight-seeing. As we both still live with our relatives it gives us a great opportunity to have some privacy and some alone time together. We arrive on the Friday night and enter the cabin we have booked. It is simple but nice. It is freezing and so we turn the heater on and start cooking dinner.

    Mrs Z disappears while Mr continues to cook dinner and re appears in a towel and she goes for a shower. She comes back out of the bathroom in a tight little G-string and has no top on. She knows the windows are open and if someone was to look they would see her breasts and then a glimpse of her ass if they concentrate. Again she disappears and then re-enters the kitchen area wearing shorts and a zipped jumper which showed her hard nipples through the fabric. We proceed to cook and then eat dinner. Mr then goes for a shower as they are both about to go to bed and call it a night. He enters the bedroom naked with his cock dangling around with each step he takes.

    Mrs Z is already in bed wearing some very cute lingerie. She wiggles forward and laying on her stomach, cradles Mr Zs balls with her hand while using the other hand to slowly start to tease his shaft. She stops and allows Mr Z to enter the bed and lays in the middle of the bed forcing him to go on top of her. Mr starts to tease her by kissing her neck, down her stomach and on the inside of her thighs. She then sits up and takes off her lingerie as it falls off her boobs are revealed and all that is left is the small g string. Mr Z grabs her thighs and pushes her legs over the top of her head as he kisses on top of the G-string and starts to feel moisture creeping through. He pulls them off and once again tests Mrs Zs flexibility by pushing her legs over herself which gives a great image for Mr Z. With her legs forced over her, Mrs Zs ass and pussy are exposed allowing Mr Z to begin licking her, he doesn’t start slow but rushes straight in and places his tongue in her pussy and then slowly makes his way to her clit. He can hear her moan as she loves having her clit teased, spit on and licked very hard. She then pulls Mr Z up on top of her so his very hard cock is laying before her mouth. She slowly takes it in her mouth and grips his ass at the same time. Slowly pushing on Mr Zs ass is forcing his cock deeper in her mouth until she gags and spit runs down and onto her boobs. This continues for a while until Mr Zs dick is nice and slippery and ready to enter.

    Mr Z is back between the legs of Mrs Z as he stares at her amazing wet pussy he starts pushing the top of his cock from her clit down and over her pussy. She can’t take it anymore and reaches down to place Mr Zs penis in her pussy and as he enters she moans. The deeper he pushes, the louder her moan. She grabs his tight bum and feels each thrust, each time leaving a new scratch on the behind of Mr Z. He begins to be rough with her, just how she likes it, and with each thrust the banging of hips becomes louder and the moans from both of them increase. Mr Z slides down beside Mrs Z and continues to penetrate her from a spooning position. Slowly he thrusts into Mrs Z as he massages her ass cheeks with one hand. Mrs Z then reminds Mr that they have the cabin to themselves and that he should go and sit on the couch for her please. He does this and walks straight to the couch, sits down, and starts jerking his very erect and wet cock.

    Mrs Z follows him to the couch and on her way opens a few curtains so that if someone was awake in another cabin and was sitting on the balcony could enjoy the show. She stands on the couch over Mr Z and pulls his hair so that he is buried in her wet pussy. He tastes her cum and it drives him insane. He looks at his cock and notices that she has left some cum down his cock and this just excites him even more. Mr Z grabs her waist and lowers Mrs Z onto his cock as she starts grinding and riding both moan in pleasure, Mr Z pulls her over his shoulder and takes charge by thrusting hard and fast into her pussy as she loves that. Mrs Z then gets off the couch and kneels down and throttles Mr Zs cock with her hand and pulls her hand down his shaft. She can see all of her juices over his cock as they are a very juicy white colour and so she helps him out by licking them off his cock.

    Mr Z then suggests the dining table could be fun so Mrs Z lays a blanket over the table, lays on her back and begins to rub her clit for Mr Z. The table is the perfect height and Mr Z grabs her ankles, spreads her legs and begins fucking her hard and fast. You can see her cum once again all around her pussy and Mr Z rubs some on his fingers and licks it up. After a while fucking on the table the couple decides they will finish in the bedroom. Mr Z bends Mrs Z over the bed and fucks her as hard as he can in doggy style, she gives a cheeky grin when Mr slaps her ass so he assumes she wants it rough. He places his leg over hers and onto the bed to give deeper penetration and spits down between her cheeks. As the spit runs down between her ass cheeks Mr Z runs his finger down and over her tight virgin asshole and this sends a pleasure down her spine. He can tell she is close to finishing so Mr puts his foot back down, grabs both her ass cheeks and spreads them. He then gets down on his knees and places his tongue in her pussy once again while massaging her clitoris with his finger. She is squirming and as she is close to finishing he begins to pound her pussy again and he feels her pelvic muscles clench around his penis as she squirms and moans in pleasure. He quickly flips her back over and begins to focus on licking her clit as she starts to struggle to contain herself she grabs his finger and begins to suck it to try and be quite. She locks his head into her pussy by wrapping her legs around his neck as she is exhausted by pleasure. Mr Z re-enters her in missionary position and slowly grinds his cock into her exhausted pussy. She is still squirming with every thrust. She tells him to come up to her boobs, so he does. He rests his cock on her breasts as she begins to jerk his cock and massage his balls until he explodes with pleasure and lays cum all over her petite and worn out young breasts.

    The couple kiss and then join each other in the shower to clean up.

    Written by Mr and Mrs Zazzles.
     
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  2. woodster

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    very nice read and excellant sex. she's hot
     
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    such vivid description, loved it made me all worked up!

    this: Again she disappears and then re-enters the kitchen area wearing shorts and a zipped jumper which showed her hard nipples through the fabric.

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    this: She is squirming and as she is close to finishing he begins to pound her pussy again and he feels her pelvic muscles clench around his penis as she squirms and moans in pleasure.

    KEEP'em Cummin Mr&Mrs Zee!
     
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  4. Zazzles

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    Thankyou very much, we like to know that the writing itself is being honored and not just the imagery of the sexual acts in the story :)
     
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  5. Zazzles

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    Thank you Woodster :)
     
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    That does make my morning more interesting. :) thanks
     
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  7. Zazzles

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    Thanks for reading :)
     
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    Next time can I be from the cabin next door who just happens to be out for a hike and catches you through the open window? ;)
     
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    That sounds like fun ;)
     
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    I enjoyed reading it! Great sex action! Maybe add a pic to the story as a visual aid ;)
     
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    Strictly literature in this section :p hehe but maybe next time, thanks for your feedback :)
     
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    looking forward to reading more
     
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  13. Zazzles

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    thanks for he feedback so far everyone :)
     
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    I read this while at work. I am so fucking hard right now, I want to jerk off so bad! Thank you for driving my cock crazy ;)
     
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    thankyou, youre welcome
     
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    Awesome story!:) I bet Mrs. Z is one fun woman;) Keep them coming:)
     
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    Thank you :)
     
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    Thanks everyone for the feedback :) I suppose it's time to start thinking of our next story
     
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    Great story although a better description of her lingerie would be awsome but u have me all worked up at the possibility of what she might wear
     
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