An erotic poem...

Discussion in 'Erotic Literature' started by BassDude, Nov 4, 2008.

  1. BassDude

    BassDude New Member

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    Soft words roll off your lips, one after the other,
    staring into your eyes, we melt into each other.
    Wrap myself around you and feel your heartbeat so near,
    licentious spices whispered softly in your ear.

    A sensual slow dance, libidinous and tantric,
    nothing seperates us but insignficant fabric.
    Sunset slowly becomes a quiet night,
    you now dressed in nothing but candlelight.

    I taste all the ecstacy I can entice from you,
    and feel the passion of your involuntary moves.
    As I awake from my erotic dream to see
    I discover that it's lascivious reality.

    BD

     
  2. Golden

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    Nice, enjoyed your poem, well done writing with an classic scheme =)

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    Good job BD! Very elegant. Hope to read more of your poems.
     
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    ohhh very nice :D
     
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    Thank y'all...your positive comments much appreciated!

    BD
     
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    Great job BD!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Nice poem, I enjoyed it as much as everyone who read it.