A random surprise for me (First Erotic Story)

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  1. Untamed

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    [Fictional]

    It was a miserable day at work so it was nice to finish up and be headed home.
    While I was driving I received a weird text from my wife saying "I hope you're ready for a wild night"
    Hmm.. I thought to myself that's funny, couldn't think of my wife doing something wild. My wife and I had your typical relationship, sex twice a week, maybe the odd night out with friends.
    I text back "Okay hun, what's the deal?" she replied "It's a surprise babe"

    I pulled into the driveway to see that her friend Jane was here.
    *sigh* and I said to myself "Great another scrap-booking night.. what could be so wild about that?"

    When I enter the house, it's quite dark aside from a red light coming from the far bedroom. Thought to myself that is unusual, they usually do their crafty things in the dining room.

    I hear a giggle and some dance music, so I head towards the room. The door is slightly ajar so I peek in. Jane a short curvy blonde lay in the middle of the bed in her bra and panties. Her bra was made of black lace and I could faintly see that her dark nipples were erect as she playfully touched them. Her matching black and red panties were so tight and transparent that I could vaguely see her pussy.
    Wow, What on earth is she doing!?!?

    That is when I see my wife walk over to the bed, her long brown hair flowing around her beautiful face. She's wearing her white mini-skirt and a loose red crop top which revealed that she had no bra on as the bottom of her breasts were protruding.

    I let out a loud gasp as she climbs on to the bed about to straddle Jane. She turns in surprise to see me standing in the doorway. The both of them look happy to see me and Jane says "About time you came home, we were beginning to get restless"

    I walk in and my wife says "Jane how about you undress him"
    Jane gets off the bed.. oh my god her ass looks so good in her lacy boyshort panties. She heads towards me and slowly begins to take of my clothes.
    Starting with my shirt, she lifts it over my head and throws it to the ground.
    Holding on to my waist she gently caresses my chest with her tongue, does a few circles around each of my nipples and then begins to lick all the way down my abdomen. When she reaches the top of my pelvis she stops, looks up at me with a sexy mischievous grin and proceeds to unzip my jeans.

    As Jane slides down my jeans I look over to my wife who has lifted her crop top slightly to play with her right nipple. Is this really happening??

    With my jeans around my ankles Jane slowly removes them and puts them to the side. She then comes back up and using her teeth takes off my boxers.
    Oh god! my cock is rock hard! Jane slides her hands up my legs and then pushes me to a sitting position on the bed.

    My wife then kneels next to me on the bed, slides her tongue into my mouth giving me a wet juicy kiss. While we're kissing she reaches for my hand and places it on her right nipple. I twist it gently and she let's out a little moan. She then grabs on to my hard cock and starts to stroke it. She leans down to lick the tip a few times letting her saliva drip all the way down to my balls and then shoves it all in to her mouth "Ohhh.. fuck ohh babe that feels so good".

    Jane still standing right in front of me turns around with her back towards me then sliding her hands over the top of her panties she slowly bends over to take them off. Now with her pussy and ass fully exposed as she is bent over in front of me, I take my hands and squeeze her ass tight. I then massage her ass-hole and slowly work my way towards her pussy.

    With my wife sucking rampantly on my cock it's hard to keep focus but I pull it together and begin to rub Janes clit. Oh god I can feel her getting moist.
    She moans a little and then stands up to hop on the bed. She lays me back and says "mind if I sit on your face?" I look to my wife who is busy stroking and sucking on my cock who nods in approval. "Go for it" I say.

    Jane straddles my face in the direction of my wife. Oh, her pussy smells so sweet. I rub on her clit a bit more then push my finger deep into her pussy, first one, then two, then three. "Lick my clit" she says and moves into a better position over my face. So as I am fingering her using my tongue I flick and circle her clit.

    My wife beginning to get really aroused slides down her lacy pink G-string leaving on the skirt. I could've never imagined this happening to me but it was. She climbs on top of me, slides my hard cock inside her wet pussy and starts to grind on top of me. I take a glimpse towards her and see my cock going in and out of her pussy as she begins to bounce.

    Jane obviously liking what she sees begins to drip a little more over my tongue. As my wife's breasts are bouncing up and down Jane grabs on to them and squeezes them both hard. Oh god I can feel my wife get even more wet as her juices drip all over my balls.

    My wife then leans a little closer to Jane unclasps her bra and begins to lick her right nipple and play with her left. Jane begins to tremble and I can feel her pussy contracting around my fingers, so I finger and lick more vigorously.
    She lets out a loud moan and screams "Ahhh I'm cuming, I'm gonna cum, I'm gonna cum" she squeezes harder on my wife's breast, and I feel her climaxing juices just burst from within all over my lips and tongue.

    Pleased with her orgasm she hops off my face and moves closer to my wife who is riding me and kisses her passionately. She licks from her face down to her breast. While she is caressing her breast and nipples my wife moans with pleasure. Jane then slides her finger down to my wife's clit and plays with it.

    Oh god my wife looks so fuckin hot! her breasts full and her nipples erect. Oh my I want to cum. I want to but I hold off.

    Jane rubs my wife's clit a little faster and hungrily licks her breasts as well.
    I feel my wife's pussy tighten around my cock. She moves back and forth a little faster. Oh gosh I know this feeling, she's going. With her breathing getting really intense she says "I'm going to cum baby, oh god I'm going to cum" I feel her ass tighten a top my balls and she screams out "I'm cuming, oh I'm cuming, ohh.....". Her moans of ecstasy nearly bring me to my climax but yet again I hold off as in the back of my mind I want to bend her over and take her from behind.

    She slides my now drenched cock out of her pussy and hops off. Her and Jane look at each other and once again begin to kiss. They both begin to play with each others breasts. Watching their tongues caressing the other my cock gets harder than ever!

    I stand up pull my wife towards me and then push her over the bed with her ass up in the air. I slide her skirt back and bend down to give her pussy a quick lick so I can taste her sweet juices. I then stand up straight and push my cock deep inside her pussy. I squeeze the sides of her ass cheeks as I thrust my cock in and out. I let out a few deep moans "Oh fuck yeah oh fuck me.. ohhh"

    Jane comes up behind me and I feel her breasts against my back. She slides down to her knees and begins to play with my balls. "Oh god, oh fuck I can't hold in any longer" I yell. Jane leans in closer and says "my turn" she takes my balls into her mouth.

    "Oh fuck that's it, ohhh fuck.. I'm gonna cum girls" I pull my cock out of my wife's pussy and she kneels down with Jane. I turn towards them now holding my cock in my hand I stroke it hard a few times. Let out the loudest moan I have EVER and squirt my huge load over both of their faces.

    I fall onto the bed exhausted. Jane and my wife are now just sitting on the edge of the bed giggling and licking the cum off each others face. I tell them that it was an amazing experience and Jane thanks my wife for inviting her.

    The two of them leave the room, I hear my wife say goodbye and for Jane to just text if she's ever lonely. As I look out the window and see Jane's car lights trail off, my wife returns to the room lays down on the bed with me, wraps her arms around me and quietly whispers "Thank you my love, you were amazing" and with that said I slowly drifted off to sleep.
     
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    Excuse my grammar.. I am useless at correctly placing commas and periods. But you get the jist. Sheesh that took a long while to copy from my diary!!!!!!!!! But I felt like sharing :)
     
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    Ya know what's a hoot? Just this morning, I was thinking about writing a story from a man's perspective and 'Tadaa!", you've gone and beat me to it. :p

    I like the way you wrote the piece, btw. :tup

     
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    Thank you Cowboy Lover :)
     
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    What a great read.... I truly enjoyed it. Judging by the tent in my pants, pry a lil to much. Great job though.
     
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    very good! very interesting from the male's point of view, that caused a few lines of confusion!

    good job, looking forward to seeing some more pieces off you :)
     
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    Hey Taken, you did very well here, it's totally a guy's perspective and fantasy.
    I really dig how you describe the sweet pussy juices running down his balls, was feeling it whilst reading and even forgot it was fiction...........or was it based on something akin to real?
    See you got me fantasising now!
     
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    I can see why now, some of my hot wetness has dripped on the head of your cock, mixing with the pre-cum that is oozing out of it. Are you watching as I reach between my legs to part my thick, engorged, lips? I bet it’s driving you mad at how slowly I’m lowering my pussy down upon your rod, taking it in inch by delicious inch.
     
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    God any guy who is with you is a lucky man. I'll be thinking of your story next time my wifes friend comes over.
     
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    Thank you I appreciate your feedback :)
     
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    Absolutely deeeelish! Hmmmm, next time my wife tells me she has a surprise for me....I'll wonder!!.....Great read......Jameson
     
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    Great read indeed! That was very arousing...
     
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    Very good - you are talented you know
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    The two of them leave the room, I hear my wife say goodbye and for Jane to just text if she's ever lonely. As I look out the window and see Jane's car lights trail off, my wife returns to the room lays down on the bed with me, wraps her arms around me and quietly whispers "Thank you my love, you were amazing" and with that said I slowly drifted off to sleep.
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    I like the end and the beginning - if know how to start and finish a story, I want more from you ..this was nice smooth and hotly erotic
     
  15. Alwayslearningsex

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    Untamed, I like your writing.
    I will be stuck with those visions in my mind at work at wait for tonight to ....