a new poem

Discussion in 'Erotic Literature' started by angelbaby, May 12, 2007.

  1. angelbaby

    angelbaby New Member

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    What I feel inside is sometimes overwhelming
    When I sit and wait for you to get home.
    When you come through the door
    I want so much for you to take me in your arms
    kiss me and touch me in that special way
    that makes my heart beat faster
    I want you to make sweet,passionate love to me all nite long
    I want to fall asleep in your strong arms our desires spent
    and make love when we wake up
    I want to feel you inside me
    making me yours
    like you have for so long.
    what I feel inside for you
    is something i never thought
    i could feel for anyone.
    but since you came into my life
    I believe anything is possible.
    i actually wrote this for my honey a few months ago:sf :drool
     
  2. bubbajr

    bubbajr New Member

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    thats nice and sweet i loved it
     
  3. rockerz

    rockerz New Member

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    certainly a good one
     
  4. zeijit

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    not bad
     
  5. Firecracker

    Firecracker New Member

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    That's really sweet and beautiful! Good job!