A good woman

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  1. macishone

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    Ok well let me start off by saying that this is my first attempt at public literotica. This story is true but left unfinished for a reason. I would like to have sum participation from the ladies on here to help me rewrite what happens next. I know what really happened and it was amazing but fiction can sometimes be better than reality. So please enjoy and please comment. Constructive criticism or just criticism is welcome. Thanks - MAc



    I came home early to what I thought was an empty house. I walked in, took my boots off, hung my beret on the hook tossed my keys aside just like I did every other day. I proceeded into the shower where I took care of the normal manscaping and took extra care to ensure my shaft and balls were silky smooth with only a breath of hair over top. I finished up put on some boxers and continued into my master room. Where, unbeknownst to me, my live in girlfriend Jamie was completely oblivious to my presence. I moved towards her sitting at the computer. As I moved closer I noticed what had her attention, she had ear phones in and was watching porn. It was a pretty good scene that immediately made my boxers start to stir. I noticed that she was wearing a wife beater tank top and basketball shorts (one of her favorites for being lazy) however I didn't notice any bra straps..... I love that she never needed them..... She was really intent on the screen so I took this opportunity. In one fluid motion I pulled one ear bud out of her and wrapped my hand over her mouth. In her now open ear I whispered just relax, enjoy your shows and let me take care of you. I started on that same ear as my hand slid off her mouth and down to her throat gently pulling back against it to constrict her. I nibbled and bit her ear and moved down her neck to the bare skin on her shoulders, where she enjoyed long wet kisses all the way back up. I start to let my hands roam down the front of her body just barely touching her. On my way back up I guide her arms up above her head, followed promptly by her tank top. Her body, as always, is breathtaking, so tan and supple yet tight and strong. I fashion the tank top into a blindfold and place it around her head. I go back to the teasing I had started before, again letting my hands roam down the front of her body while I am standing behind her biting and kissing her neck and ears ever so often. As I move my hands over her body I ensure I don't touch her nipples, I want them to ache for release. During my teasing I issue one simple order.... " Reach down and slide your shorts off but don't stand up" she follows my orders to a tee showing me that I am not the only one that did some scaping today..... She is completely smooth and glistening in the light. I am almost drooling at the sight of this so I decide to take this a step further. Again I tell her not to move as I roll her just far enough away from the desk for me to stand in front of her. I remove my boxers unleashing my swollen and throbbing member, I reach back to the back of her head and with an almost mean nipple pinch tell her to open her mouth and to keep her hands on my legs and nothing else. I guide her mouth towards my stiff dick. I tell her to love my dick, she tenderly takes me into her mouth and starts to hungrily suck me in. I am almost lost in the sensations when I realize she was just greedily sucking my cock not loving it. So I pulled it away with a pop followed almost by a whimper from her. I informed her that she had broken the rules and now she will have to wait to please me. I tell her "to sit back and don't move till I tell you too. Also anywhere I put one of your limbs I want it to stay there". She nods her understanding. I put each of her arms on the arms of the chair and with me still between her and her workstation I put a leg up on the desk on either side of me making sure they are good and wide. Opening her beautiful pussy lips just enough to gimme a glimpse of what lies beneath. I get down between her legs and start lapping at her inner thighs running my tongue from the inside of her right knee all the way up to the outter lips of her pussy and then jumping over to continue my torture on the other side. Soon her pussy has become a perfect rose bud with her inner lips starting to protrude. I start at the very base of her slit, licking with my tongue, nice flat long hard strokes then soft strokes going up just high enough to not quite touch her clit. While I am pleasing her pussy with my tongue and lips I decide to give her something she has been yearning for. I reach up and cup each breast separately holding each nipple between two fingers and rolling them back and forth pinching lightly then harder. I start to lick deeper into her pussy trying to suck the sweet nectar from her honey hole, tongue fucking her. Her hips are shaking and bucking as I start to add fingers into her. I slide one digit in with ease followed by another with much more resistance. I turn my palm upward and start to massage her g-spot with two fingers making her shudder and moan. I quicken my pace and start to ravage her nipples with my mouth sucking them hard into my mouth, holding them with my lips and teeth and running my tongue all over them until she is screaming that she is cumming. I continue to finger her relentlessly during her orgasms. She fights to catch her breath but through her labored breathing she tells me she is gonna cum again.... Without warning I release her nipple and turn my attention to her poor neglected clit which is damn near at attention. With two fingers still working her pussy I engulf the top half of her pussy in my mouth sucking feverishly, the bolt of pain and pleasure jumping through her body is too much and she starts shaking more than ever..... Screaming and grinding her hips into my face which is now securely held in place by her two hands. She can't hold it any longer when I add a third finger into her and isolate just her clit with strong fast strokes of my tongue. She bucks up against me with an animalistic growl and just pants and moans as her massive orgasm explodes into my waiting mouth. She has always tasted so good hmmmmm mmmm.....

    Goddamn that woman was great.
     
  2. igor

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    Just a suggestion for the future - break it up into paragraphs. Makes it a lot easier to read.
     
  3. macishone

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    Ok thank you.... Perhaps I will fix it and re post it for an easier read.... But I will definitely do that on my next on.
     
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    Igor is correct. Please reformat and repost so I can read it. Thank you. :)
     
  5. macishone

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    Yes ma'am
     
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    It's a done deal, sweet-tits.
     
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    Very long story. I was not able to fully read (
     
  8. macishone

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    I have reposted this in a better format with some help of CL and I have also posted the second happening of this expedition. Sorry you were unable to enjoy it hopefully it will get better.
     
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